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Posted by crusty_mcboobs on 2005.11.27 at 04:11
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Can't believe
I've waited and
Tried
Wrecked it and
Yearned
And you
I don't
You see
An end
To it
Won't come.
I'm weak
And tired
Sleep on
Through days
Think thoughts
Drink more
But still
An end
Won't come.

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crusty_mcboobs at 2005-11-27 04:20 (UTC) (Link)
Erm, this has always been a problematic little bugger for me ... ive never got the rhythm right. ive done a longer version but its even more disjointed. anyway it's a desolate little comment on that awful condition known as 'hanging on'.
Qaytx
kau666 at 2005-12-22 02:10 (UTC) (Link)
can you post the longer one? it might explain more.
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