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first draft of some chapter.

Posted by doesthemagkdrgn on 2006.04.05 at 12:08

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Qaytx
kau666 at 2006-04-05 05:30 (UTC) (Link)
hey man, before i get around to reading this, could you do me a favour and lj-cut it both here and on your lj? i have a friends page that i read (mainly for the hilarious arguments on convert_me) and now it's mainly taken up with your long piece, twice.

lj-cut goes < lj-cut> at the start and < /lj-cut> without the space.
or you can go < lj-cut text="My fabulous chapter about Russians and gods"> and then < /lj-cut> at the end.

Ok, now i've got to reading it. Just a bit. I have to go to work soon. What is this word melge? It sounds like a cross between merge and meld. And is his name Pietrov, Pirtrov or Piertrov, cos you changed it twice in one paragraph. And did you intend to put an e on the end of cast? Cos I don't see what it has to do with a social class. This is much more fun than work. I'm a crap literature reviewer but I'm a living spell-checker.
Puff the Magic Dragon
doesthemagkdrgn at 2006-04-12 02:11 (UTC) (Link)
the spelling is Piertrov, tho occasionally i type too fast and miss the r... or many other letters.
the e was accidental.
melge is a word Shaun and i have been throwing around for years. in first yr he would test his lecturers by seeing if they see it in an essay. it is a mixture of merge and meld, purely accidental when i spoke it, but i wanted to see if i could ever use it casually in a story, essay, or conversation.
i'll try that text cut now, Christina tried to tell me how but should couldn't direct a compass north.
DmD
Qaytx
kau666 at 2006-04-13 11:03 (UTC) (Link)
well done!
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